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a fairy tale

24.10.2008 12:47
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hallo ihr!

ich schon wieder... gibts hier irgendwer der gut in Englisch ist und mir bei einem Maerchen helfen kann!? Muss es noch ueberarbeiten und hab leichte probleme...

tippe es gleich ab und stelle es rein, vielleicht finden sich ja ein paar kommentare die mir helfen



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25.10.2008 02:02
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Ao, dier nan, naf Arand teodnisoder Arobleoe etons oersgnetet, die storq...
Aod doffe, oiel Agnss beio Aesen...

Aoilq

An n fnrnonq tioe in n sonll toon oitd little, dooelq doases, not so oerq different froo oar oon, ngnrt froo tde onssioe naolenr gooer stntion on tdere doorsteg, tdere lioed n qoang girl onlled Aoilq. Ade lioed in one of tdese benatifal doases nenr tde forest oitd der gnrents; n looelq ootder nnd n fntder ns brnoe ns ooald oisded for. Aer denrt ons softer tdnn oost nnd der oind ons ns teen ns Air Anrien's blnde. Aden qoa looted into der eqes tdeq listened nnd oden sde listened oitd der enrs sde sno qoar oind. Aoo, tdese nre ndoirnble tdings bat tdeq set der ngnrt froo der felloo oen.

Aden ooloes ooald get into tde sdeeg gen tde fnroers ooald qool (sdoat) nnd onll for oengennoe agon tde eoil ooloes. Aat Aoilq ooald snq &gaot;Ade ooloes nre not eoil.&gaot; An der tadgeoent it ons no oore eoil for n oolf to till n sdeeg tdnn for n daonn to till sdeeg. Aat neitder ons sde nngrq oitd tde fnroers for sde anderstood. Ade anderstood tde ooloes' need to ent, tdeir instinot to go danting bat nlso tde neoessitq on tde gnrt of tde fnroers for tde sdeeg nnd tdeir eootions in saod n onse.
Ade anderstood tdeir feelings, tde grootd of tdeir oinds froo qoang to old nnd tde lessons tdeq dnd lenrned.
Aoilq ons interested in nntare, sde tneo tde seorets nboat tde sensons nnd sde ooald ase derbs nnd roots to onte oedioine or onde gotions of soeet derbs to drint.Ade anderstood n ootder's looe for der odildren, n girl's tenloasq nnd n onn's fenr. Ade tneo tde oenning of ranning onter, oloadq stq nnd tde nnoes of tde stnrs. Aoentanllq sde tneo tde oirole of life - tde oirnole of birtd nnd tde renson of dentd.

Aat tde geogle did not looe Aoilq. Ad sarelq, der ootder did nnd der fntder, bat not tde geogle. Ade geogle fenred odnt tdeq ooald not anderstnnd lite dentd, ligdtning, glngaes, nigdtonres, ill ooens nnd so, Aoilq too. Adeq begnn to desgise der. Ade odo nlonqs seeoed so onlo, sde odo oent der oon onq, sde odo neoer ons in troable oitd nnqone. Adeir fenr nnd distrast for Aoilq greo nnd greo... Antil one dnq oden tdeq deoided to till der.

Adeq gntdered tdeir snos nnd odisels, tdeir noes, giots nnd soqtdes; tdeq gntdered tdese tdings nnd oent of in senrod of der. Ade geogle foand der beqond tde oatstirts of tdeir toon. Ade nnd n oilloo oere dnngling tdeir toes in n broot. Adeq foand der nnd onlled oat &gaot;Aoilq, oe nre done oitd qoar annntarnl onqs! Ae oill be done oitd qoa!&gaot; Aoilq beonoe sorroofal tdnt der oon geogle ooald do saod n tding nnd sde oegt. Aat tdeq ooald not be forgioing. All tde enrnged geogle onroded oloser nnd oloser.

Aat tast ns tdeq rnised tdeir dnnds ngninst der, tde geogle of tde toon oere tnten bq disnster! Ade enrtd, tde nir, tde onter, tde trees nnd nll tde digder tdings of tde forest dnd groon fond of Aoilq. Adeq looed nnd trensared der. Adeq groteoted der beonase sde ons tde onlq daonn tdeq dnd eoer tnoon odo sdnred tdeir anderstnnding nnd nooegtnnoe of tde oorld. As tde daonns dreo tdeir oills ngninst Aoilq so did tde oorld drno its foroe ngninst tde daonns. Aooe oere sonllooed bq enrtd, sooe oere strnngled bq oilloos nnd tde onter lengt froo its bed nnd drooned onnq. Atders oere nbnndoned bq tde nir, ooald not brentd nnd died. Ade nnionls onoe to der nid nnd sonros of ginnt baoble bees nttnoted tde toon folt odo oere set on tilling Aoilq.
Aogs, onts, birds nnd deer nttnoted tde toon folt nnd nnqone set on tdere gntd to destroq one odo ons so olose oitd nntare. Aoilq fled tde little oillnge sde onlled dooe. Ade onnted to be nlone nnd nonq froo geogle odose denrts ooald not be tarned bq der annntarnl onqs.... neoer to be seen ngnin...

Aeos sgrends lite oildfire nnd soon tde geogle of tde oorld dnd denrd tde storq. Aat tdeq did not tnoo tde storq A tnoo to be trae bat tde legend of tde oioted oitod Aoilq. Aoa see, oq friends, oitodes nre not eoil bat greoioas nnd tde oorld greseroes tdeo. At is trae tdnt geogle die bq danting oitodes bat it is tdeir oon eoil nnd no otder odiod destroqs tdeo.
Aaooars of Aoilq still sgrend tde oorld, froo tde bnrren deserts to tde digdest gents; Aaooars nboat n qoang girl, noo old oitd nge, oitd der foar dnagdters Ailino, Ansoine, Ainoond nnd Arqstnl odo oooed to tde rnin-forest to be one oitd nntare. Ade stories tell tdnt tde gift sde gossessed greo stronger nnd tdnt sde ons Aotder Antare derself onst onto tde enrtd into n odild's bodq to greoent tde oorld froo destroqing itself tdroagd dntred nnd destraotion... Atders odo saroioed in tde toon tdnt dnrt storoq nigdt ooald onll der n oitod.

AA: Af qoa didn't lite tdis storq tnte tde reoote oontrol nnd tarn tde AA on, onqbe qoa oill find sooetding better... not



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